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I Love My Brother the Bluest
By Anna, 7th grade

I love you the color of the vast ocean lapping gently on the beach
I love you the color of the endless sky making the day look cheerful and bright
The color of my worn and faded blanket bringing me joy and comfort
The color of your big, round, chair surrounding me like a cocoon
The color of any pool inviting us to jump in and play
I love you, Brother, the bluest

Color of Love Poem

By Betsy, 7th grade

 

I love you, Mom, the reddest.

 

I love you the color of sugary sweet Hawaiian Punch.

 

I love you the color of a deliciously juicy strawberry

on a cool summers day.

 

The color of a stop sign demanding attention,

 

The color of a fresh tulip just blooming,

 

The color of Jesus’ blood poured out for us,

 

I love you, Mom, the reddest.

I love you Mom the Redest I love you Mom, the Purplest
By Magela, 2nd grade

I love you, Mom, the purplest
The flowers that bloom in the spring
The purple moon
The color of a kind heart
The color of a rainbow
The color of a purple ball

I love you, Mom, the purplest



I love you Mom the Redest
by Gudelia, 4th grade

I love you the color of the roses
I love you the color of inside
I love you the color of my heart

The color of the blood
The color of the clown’s nose
The color of my love for you

I love you Mom the Redest



I LOVE YOU, MOM THE YELLOWEST
By Christopher, 4th grade

I LOVE YOU, MOM, THE YELLOWIST

I LOVE YOU LIKE THE CHEESE ON PIZZA

I LOVE YOU LIKE THE COLOR OF FIRE ON A COLD NIGHT THAT WARMS MY HEART

THE COLOR OF A BANANA ONCE YOU EAT IT

THE COLOR OF JOY ON CHRISTMAS MORNING AND THE LOOK ON OUR FACES

THE LOVE OF DAD THAT STAYS WITH YOU LIKE US

I LOVE YOU THE YELLOWEST, MOM

The Color of Love

By Ashton, 2nd Grade

 

I love you, Dad, the bluest.

I love you the color of the enormous sky that rains down to help plants grow.

I love you the color of the salty ocean that great white sharks live in.

I love you the color of delicious superman ice cream that turns my tongue bright blue. 

The chirping bluebird in my tree.

The beautiful eyes of my baby brother, Camdon, who I couldn't live without.

The scrumptious icing that tastes really good. 

I love you, Dad, the bluest.

The Color of Love

By Jackson, 2nd Grade

 

I love you, Mom and Dad, the purplest.

I love you the color of Annie's jacket on the cover of one of my favorite books.

I love you the color of the lovely grapes that you pack in my lunch box.

I love you the color of Brett Farve's jersey that he wears on the football field.

The small orchids that blow in the wind.

The grape suckers that I get at the bank.

The spectacular fireworks that explode in the black sky at the beach on the Fourth of July.

I love you, Mom and Dad, the purplest.

The Color of Love

By Austin, 2nd Grade

 

I love you, Daddy, the reddest.

I love you the color of the brightest flame from the hot sun.

I love you the color of scrumptious spaghetti sauce that fills my plate at dinner time. 

I love you the color of a shiny fire engine that dashes down the street to put out a fire. 

The blushed cheeks from embarrassment. 

The brightest part of my heart.

The slimy ketchup on my salty french fries.

I love you, Daddy, the reddest.

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