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Inspired by two of Gretchen Bernabei's book, Sparklers: High Scoring Essays and What they Teach Us and Cruchtime, we began collecting "sparkling" student samples from our local students who were practicing to the practice prompts we use in Northern Nevada. These sparklers (as well as other authentic test-prep materials) can be found on our Nevada's Writing Exam Homepage.
Two suggested uses of Sparklers: 1) Having your students discuss these "Nevada Sparklers" before, during, or after they write (for practice) to the same prompt can greatly increase their skills. 2) Reviewing and discussing these sparklers in the weeks immediately before the actual test should serve to remind your students of skills they should be using when they take their near-future exam.
WE WANT A FEW MORE SPARKLERS TO THIS PROMPT! Each year, we plan to add 20-30 new Sparklers from students using our practice prompts as they prepare for the writing test. If you're a teacher using our practice prompts, and you end up with a student sample you think would score between a 15 and 19, please type it up and post it in the "Leave a Reply" box that you will see below; you will only be able to post if you are a member of our ning. If we end up featuring a sample you post over at the WritingFix website, we will send you a free print resource from the Northern Nevada Writing Project.
Help us celebrate your writers whose samples would inspire future writing. Post here.
If you are posting here, the students' samples should be about this practice prompt: Remember a time when you did something that made you feel proud of yourself. Think about what you did and how you felt about it. Try to remember the details clearly in your mind. Then write about what you did, including the sights and sounds of the moment.
IMPORTANT: Do not include anything more than your students' first name and grade level when citing your posted sample.