"How to Use ABC's of Revision
Bludgeon Overused words
Create Prepositional phrases
Form Series, after series, after series
Go for Transitions
My Mentor Text: My Tour of Europe by Teddy Roosevelt, Age 10In this text, edited by Ellen Jackson, Ellen takes a portion of Teddy's journal, written when he was 10 years old, and turns it into a beautifully illustrated snapshot of one portion of his life. She depicts a family trip to Europe and the numerous places and sites the family visited. Her entire text describing the illustrations is text taken from a primary source, Roosevelt's journal.The assignment I would use this text for would be…See More
"Subbing today. Am printing it off if it ever ends!!! Will take it with and maybe get to it over lunch. thanks much for all the contact. Feel like I am part of the group already!
ps: It's done!"